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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : This my Poem هذي من تأليفي


Avril
09-04-2008, 01:29 AM
This my Poem هذي من تأليفي


Please come back
Come back for my sake
Live with you that is my aim
This is truth I never play game
Your love is live it never die
Sky is witness it never lie
Hard parting, fill me pain
Soul hanged in heavy chain
I sink in your sea
I'm blind let me see
But I hear in my ears
The fall of your tears
Garden needs rain
And me need fain

BoHaDaR
09-04-2008, 10:36 AM
A few words really beautiful

I have been impressed by my sister

Thank you

مداد قلم
09-04-2008, 02:17 PM
Thank you, my brother

Parts good God

لكن ممكن تترجم لنا بالعربي .>>>>>> مافهمت !!!؟؟؟ (^_^)

princesse
09-08-2008, 04:28 PM
thanks brother for the poem




it's really beautiful




accept my passing




my best regards

الوشق
10-10-2008, 10:14 PM
mrs Avril it wenderfull Poem

it fantastic

I like too much

it's relly like a song for RAP music

where are you sister we miss you

please return to us

we waiting you

best wishs

القناص
01-01-2009, 11:25 AM
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الطائر المغرد
04-29-2009, 01:27 AM
soooooooooo nice

salem 10
06-12-2009, 03:58 PM
it's really beautiful
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks

ابوبندر
06-12-2009, 04:27 PM
what a wonderful poem was
do you know that it will be suitable for a song,rap songs.

i would like to see more of this notification
best wishes

المجلس المحلي
06-12-2009, 05:12 PM
thanks brother for the poem

الحضرمية
06-12-2009, 09:08 PM
It's so nice poem
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks
but i want to ask u r u man or woman ?